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There's so many things I don't like at this point. How Willa is made to be the world's best female soccer player and we've only seen her play once. How Ry and her keep calling themselves enemies, when the worst thing they've done to each other is banter. How literally everything is TELLING and not showing, especially about their behaviours. How it was so much exposition, etc...
— Sep 16, 2021 01:19AM
There's so many things I don't like at this point. How Willa is made to be the world's best female soccer player and we've only seen her play once. How Ry and her keep calling themselves enemies, when the worst thing they've done to each other is banter. How literally everything is TELLING and not showing, especially about their behaviours. How it was so much exposition, etc...
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I don't know, it is enjoyable, but it's so much telling and not showing, especially when it comes to Willa's infamous temper. Also a lot of stuff are repeated because we have 2 different POVs AND I found the "spend quality time together or else you're failing" story line a bit too far fetched for college students
— Sep 15, 2021 03:50PM
I don't know, it is enjoyable, but it's so much telling and not showing, especially when it comes to Willa's infamous temper. Also a lot of stuff are repeated because we have 2 different POVs AND I found the "spend quality time together or else you're failing" story line a bit too far fetched for college students
