Lori S.’s Reviews > Honey Girl > Status Update
Lori S.
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Oh yuck. It's in Third Person Present tense. Ugh. I feel like there's a layer of clear plastic between me and the characters. I will attempt to keep reading, but that layer makes it hard to connect with ever the MC. 🙁
— Sep 18, 2021 06:45AM
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Way to make readers feel like Peeping Tom. Present Tense is never my favorite.