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'Dad puts his arm around his daughter and watches the fire
with her. As always, he’s searching for something - anything -
to say or do to make his daughter happier.
And just as he’s about to say something, just as he’s about to make another admirable and kind and probably slightly off-
the-mark attempt at helping the little girl that he loves so
very very much, more than anything, she speaks:'
Sep 22, 2021 11:04PM
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a*s*h is on page 95
kayla: i like your house
gabe: thanks, it's my mom's

WHY DIDNT WE GET TO SEE THIS LMAOOO
Sep 23, 2021 12:31AM
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a*s*h
a*s*h is on page 91
finally stopped bawling my eyes out, ready to resume reading
Sep 23, 2021 12:29AM
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a*s*h
a*s*h is on page 90
trying not to CRY my GOSHDARN EYES OUT at 4PM in the AFTERNOON
Sep 22, 2021 11:07PM
Eighth Grade: Screenplay


a*s*h
a*s*h is on page 89
SO YEAH. THIS SCENE STILL MAKES ME CRY
Sep 22, 2021 11:04PM
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a*s*h
a*s*h is on page 85
'Dad hugs her. She does not hug him back. She has her knees up
to her chest, her arms wrapped around her knees, her eyes
shut tight, trying to collapse herself to a single point.'
Sep 22, 2021 11:01PM
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a*s*h
a*s*h is on page 84
car scene. still horrible
Sep 22, 2021 11:00PM
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a*s*h
a*s*h is on page 73
who do i relate to?? the dad or kayla???? who knows
Sep 22, 2021 10:56PM
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a*s*h
a*s*h is on page 53
'When Gabe types, Kayla can see via a message in the chatbox saying, “GABE IS TYPING...” He types. Stops. Types again.
Stops. His next thought is going through a few drafts.'

i love this. i dunno. i do.
Sep 22, 2021 10:37PM
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a*s*h
a*s*h is on page 53
THIS POOR DAD.
bananas are the worst tho
Sep 22, 2021 10:37PM
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a*s*h
a*s*h is on page 45
i love the implicit disdain for aiden
Sep 22, 2021 10:30PM
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