Amber’s Reviews > The Dragon's Gap Series #1-3 > Status Update
Amber
is 11% done
The shitty formatting and clear lack of editor are disengaging me from a story I otherwise would like. And WTF is up with these weird ass chapter choices? She's not only cutting scenes in half to start a new chapter, I'm pretty sure she's cutting PARAGRAPHS in half. Why why won't people save up and hire an editor? Or, fuck, beg a friend to do it. SOMETHING
— Oct 01, 2021 08:54AM
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Amber
is 36% done
The author has no idea how to use commas, the punctuation is PAINFUL, but I like the pacing and the premise...I have no idea what my rating is going to be tbh
— Oct 01, 2021 09:42PM
