Kerry Richardson’s Reviews > Montana Fate: Journey Home > Status Update

I liked the premise of this story but it has failed spectacularly to live up to its blurb. To start with it is absolutely littered with grammatical errors and mistakes which I can't abide, especially the amount in this book. Secondly to the point I've reached in the story I'm not liking any of the characters and thirdly I'm not loving the way it's been written, to me there is no structure to it. I'll not read anymore