Karla Schneider’s Reviews > Redemption Song > Status Update

Declaring something doesn't make it true, especially when it's to make an excuse for what just happened despite the reality. 5 sentences into the the book: "I've never been caught until now"; uh, you just got caught, Telling people you're not stupid only makes you seem more stupid. And stupidity is a horrible plot driver. Find a way leaning more towards misfortune than stupidity to introduce events. Fking amateur.