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using differwnt tense has to follow a pattern or confuses the reader
Mar 30, 2014 03:00PM
LoveLines (The Wilmington Saga, #1)

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Evelyn Baldwin
Evelyn Baldwin is 10% done
voice used in 3pov isnt consistent.
Mar 30, 2014 02:47PM
LoveLines (The Wilmington Saga, #1)


Evelyn Baldwin
Evelyn Baldwin is 4% done
switch in tense and pov...ballsy or crazy? 3rd pov is a bit off.
Mar 29, 2014 10:37PM
LoveLines (The Wilmington Saga, #1)


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