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Adam
Adam is 87% done
Also: try to think of a secret worth killing over, so important that a large business of USAF would risk their reputations to do it. Now imagine that this secret is 65 years old. Still worth it?

Unless the witches end up being aliens or something insane like that, I won't believe it.
— Mar 31, 2014 05:24AM
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Adam
Adam is 87% done
This is really starting to annoy me. Mia and whatshisface managed to have a couple of 2-line arguments (let's go here; no, let's not) without any major issues in the past twenty pages. Now the author wants to separate the two in order to put Mia in danger, and all of a sudden we have an instant (short-term) schism. Blah.

Heading to 1-star territory here people.
— Mar 31, 2014 05:23AM
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Adam
Adam is 55% done
— Mar 28, 2014 11:58AM
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Adam
Adam is 40% done
Also: our lady at Bellman who "wants to take the company down" just received notice of a meeting with HR in one hour. Duh duh duh!.

My feeling? .
— Mar 27, 2014 06:57AM
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Adam
Adam is 40% done
Suspension of disbelief is becoming harder. Daisy was looking at a book about the USAF at the public library? That's all our protagonist needs to find the book in question plus extract the 8 pictures of planes named "Steel Witch". Really?

Also, I can't possibly see anything his mother could have discovered about the USAF that is (a) worth killing her over while also (b) involving witches.
— Mar 27, 2014 06:55AM
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Adam
Adam is 24% done
Some of the infodumps are a little clumsy, but it's at least keeping my attention on the bus.
— Mar 26, 2014 05:16AM
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Adam
Adam is 15% done
Nothing special so far, but it is competently written.
— Mar 25, 2014 01:42PM
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Adam
Adam is reading
I have no clue what this book will be about. I borrowed it on a whim from an Ottawa Library book vending machine.
— Mar 25, 2014 07:28AM
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