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butwhytho
is 47% done
This feels …shallow and empty. Sage is a Mary Sue if ever there was one: she’s just the best all around and everyone instantly loves her or comes to greatly respect her bc she’s the warmest, smartest, most capable woman they’ve ever known. 🙃 so far, the plot is flimsy, there’s no real conflict, and none of the characters have actual personalities. Sigh 😔
— Oct 21, 2021 11:00AM
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butwhytho
is 81% done
This reads like a bad Disney Channel original movie script. Besides Sage being a Mary Sue, everything just constantly works out for everyone involved either bc of magic or Sage’s know-how in every damn thing. It’s all hella eye roll inducing, and I’m ready for it to be over.
— Oct 28, 2021 03:00PM
butwhytho
is 27% done
It’s not *great*, but I’m sufficiently entertained and intrigued for now. 👌🏾
— Sep 13, 2021 08:08PM

