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Heike
is 15% done
I am a bit confused about the characters. On the one hand it sounds like Aiden is a super cool dude, then it also sounds as if he is one of the kids at school that gets bullied.
Carter on the other hand - what is he? A Nerd? What's his job, anyway? Would maybe give a better picture.
— Oct 24, 2021 08:17AM
Carter on the other hand - what is he? A Nerd? What's his job, anyway? Would maybe give a better picture.
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Heike
is 62% done
I had to force me for the last quarter of the story (35% to 60% ...) to keep reading. Half of it is alternating both protagonists thinking of the other how great he is and who he himself in non-deserving of the other, the other half is an unrealistically mean mother and an even more unrealistically cheerful daddy.
Since I expect this only going back and forth now, I'll mark it "lost-interest".
— Oct 26, 2021 08:23AM
Since I expect this only going back and forth now, I'll mark it "lost-interest".
Heike
is 15% done
This is going down the drain, I am afraid. The dialogs are stinted, the humor not funny, the characters are weird. Alone the setup - famous (!) tattoo artist closes shop for a week from one day to the next when his brother's buddy (whom he has not seen for years, nor ever talked to much) asks him to go to a wedding as his fake date. Yes, he had a crush on this guy when he was 15, but Carter is not even gay, so WTF?
— Oct 24, 2021 08:16AM
