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Annette
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Just because a metaphor sounds pretty doesn't mean it's a good metaphor. They're supposed to help the reader understand the situation or empathize with the feelings of characters; here they don't make sense and distract from the overall story
— Oct 26, 2021 07:04PM
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Annette
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You know it's bad when a character has to say he's the comic relief because the author is too incompetent to show it
— Oct 26, 2021 07:32PM
