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Book 2, still world building. Boring.
Character personality still inconsistent. Such as, Hilo's inner thoughts does not match the person he's been portrayed as. At the beginning he's settling into the political side of the clan but then in just one thought it contradicts his growth and intelligence.
— Oct 28, 2021 09:51PM
Character personality still inconsistent. Such as, Hilo's inner thoughts does not match the person he's been portrayed as. At the beginning he's settling into the political side of the clan but then in just one thought it contradicts his growth and intelligence.
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