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The Boys’ Club: 3
I just feel bad for Noah and Mohammed. Also, is Mallory trying to set Naomi up with George or Mohammed???????
— Oct 31, 2021 12:05AM
I just feel bad for Noah and Mohammed. Also, is Mallory trying to set Naomi up with George or Mohammed???????
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is 53% done
This series has:
-winking
-I think
-I’m sorry
-I think you’re right/I think so
-And/But/Because sentence starters
-lots of dialogue
-too long of chapters
-telling over showing
-short paragraphs
— Oct 30, 2021 10:44PM
-winking
-I think
-I’m sorry
-I think you’re right/I think so
-And/But/Because sentence starters
-lots of dialogue
-too long of chapters
-telling over showing
-short paragraphs
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is 25% done
The Exchange: 3.5
It was decent, but the relationships feel rushed. Where in London is this? I imagine somewhere like Stratford Upon Avon, even if it is outside the city, since it gives country vibes, but it also can’t be too far cause Buckingham Palace.
— Oct 28, 2021 11:07PM
It was decent, but the relationships feel rushed. Where in London is this? I imagine somewhere like Stratford Upon Avon, even if it is outside the city, since it gives country vibes, but it also can’t be too far cause Buckingham Palace.
♥Booknerdswift♥
is 11% done
These chapters could’ve easily been split into multiple with each day being a part.
— Oct 27, 2021 10:29PM
