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JLA has to seriously consider mapping out her characters and plot. In one page, Trinity says that they have to get him to talk. In the next few paragraphs, when he does talk, Trinity and Zayne doesn’t want to hear him talk. There’s a sequence to writing stories and instead of following that, JLA writes her books like we’re in a ping pong table and we’re the ball.

Ugh this girl needs a ball gag.

I HAD WAY MORE EMOTIONAL MATURITY THAN TRINITY AT HER AGE. This book should have been titled: Trinity and her Yo-yo Emotional Outbursts.

Jesus effing Christ in a cracker. I feel like all the conversations in this book should be in all caps.

And Trinity is consistently being a HUGE ASS BRAT and I wanna slap her face.

JLA’s female protagonists are all variations of one character it’s becoming predictable.

AND YES TRINITY, YOU’RE A BAD FRIEND.

Wtf is wrong with Trinity? She’s such an awful person.

Yep, she’s still a brat.