Elise,’s Reviews > Keys to the Demon Prison > Status Update
Elise,
is on page 245 of 593
The magic in this is very inconsistent, take for example the demon prison, in the prison it is not invincible, but nearly invincible, which is apparently the strongest type of magic, this is very confusing. I get that all magic that can be done can be undone, but when they make an object invisible thats not the strongest it can be. That doesn't make much snse to me.
— Apr 08, 2014 06:34AM
Like flag
Elise,’s Previous Updates
Elise,
is on page 307 of 593
The style of writing is very similar to other children's fantasy. They have long monologues about a character's past, is very descriptive of the characters and situations, and short snippets of dialouge. This style illustrates the scene but has the characters very simple so we don't have to think too much about the motives.
— Apr 10, 2014 06:37AM
