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so far i'm not impressed. there's too much back story description going on. I want to say, "cut down on the back story, and get on with the actual story."
— Apr 18, 2014 11:24PM
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this needs editing. Seriously. Instead of writing 'teens', the author mentions 'young adults' a couple of times in a supposed news article in the story.
— Apr 18, 2014 11:37PM
