Teri’s Reviews > Darkness Unbound > Status Update

Notes for authors on things not to do:
Don't have main characters discuss their conception with their parent/s.

Don't mention dads right before sex.

Have cringey sex scenes that sound like a Harlequin romance written by a doctor.

And FFS

Don't end sex scene with - mentioning character's mom or have character thinking about her mom..
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And last but not least - DO NOT do all these things in one book!