Nile Princess’s Reviews > Duncan's Pride > Status Update

The inconsistencies in these books drive me crazy. 'We chose not to know' 2 pages after disclosing the sex of the babies. Duncan has a driver and is so cautious that the odds of Portia being on the train so heavily pregnant is zilch, zip and zero. 'I love you, Portia' I said out loud for the first time. He's told Portia he loved her before....an editor, please!