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Well, the plot is still marginally intriguing and the writing is still fairly mediocre, especially in terms of characterization and motivation. It's like the author's trying too hard or something. But I'll keep reading to the end, I'm sure.
— Apr 23, 2014 01:38AM
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Still fairly mediocre writing in parts (lots of unnecessary repetition) and the plot devices are a bit hokey, but it's still interesting and the action scenes are fairly exciting.
— Apr 29, 2014 12:42AM
Adam
is on page 40 of 283
Somehow I got this book for free. It's starting off interesting and intriguing enough, but the writing's not necessarily great quality. Many descriptive bits are way overdone and redundantly repeated, and the dialogue also seems contrived and fake. We'll see if the quality picks up though, and at least the intro is still interesting and intriguing.
— Apr 21, 2014 12:49AM
