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Angela
Angela is 59% done
The plot is interesting so far but Scarlet is just a bit too slow that she’s annoying, and some of the analogies the authors uses are too cliche/over the top
Dec 09, 2021 05:26PM
Caraval (Caraval, #1)

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Angela
Angela is 83% done
Ugh there is much excessive use of analogies. How many ways does the author need to describe Tella’s smile in one page? “Likes hopes and dreams and wicked things,” “like shape cut glass” blah blah blah…

Also, why is it that when Tella and Scarlet meet, they don’t immediately explain what’s been happening for each of them and instead go all “just trust me sis.”
Dec 10, 2021 11:38AM
Caraval (Caraval, #1)


Angela
Angela is 80% done
Dec 10, 2021 11:06AM
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