Jude Samson’s Reviews > Powerless > Status Update

Again needless medical /injury stuff. What was the rock wal made of? Glass? To slice through leather gloves and his hands? Seriously? And then even having to put her finger on gunner’s arm? Most people clot very quickly especially from a little needle. And are we seriously supposed to believe that she would have the thought to do while being kidnapped and sold into slavery?

Prospects NEVER go from prospect to a fully patched member. They earn their colors in stages which consists of top and bottom rockers and the main logo and the main patch is always last

Makes such a much bigger deal medically to just make up page wasting drama instead of actually writing anything that propels the plot and yet one more example of how these writers wind up with more books than necessary and don’t seem to understand quantity does not raise quality.

As the stupid norm the moment someone admits they want each other 75% of the “story” is just sex and almost no plot. This is why single books are somehow and needlessly made into a series. This could have absolutely been a pretty decently written single book if not filled with utter nonsense and breaks a ton of “good writing” rules but if it had good editing it could actually be strong writing.

If someone can put a bun up under a helmet it’s not properly fit. Also, is nots called a clip (that’s the thing used to load the bullets) it’s called a magazine.