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Jyvur Entropy
is on page 60 of 166
That sex scene was....fine. It was the most 'fine' sex scene I think I've ever read. It wasn't awful, but it also wasn't good. I read SO MANY pages of alien santa worldbuilding to get there
— Dec 16, 2021 05:48PM
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Jyvur Entropy
is on page 50 of 166
I don't think this book knows what it wants to be...It's trying way too hard to be 'Kissed by the Coronavirus' meme-able. But the world-building is too fleshed out to be a meme. And I'm halfway through it and no sex has happened. Plus, the tense changes! I don't expect great writing with books like this, but past or present, pick a tense and stick with it for the love of God.
— Dec 15, 2021 06:08PM
Jyvur Entropy
is on page 30 of 166
This book is incredibly stupid, but that's exactly what I signed up for, so I'm not mad at it
— Dec 13, 2021 06:24PM
