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absolutely _ grim
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I read the sentence "panic shoving into her throat" and unfortunately that's the kind of dramatic YA drivel I've come to despise.
Furthermore...
120 pages is all I'm giving this one.
-repetitive sentences
-attempt at world building left me confused and frustrated at the lack of explanation.
-dynamic between characters feels underdeveloped so I didn't feel.
-I wouldn't say this author has a way with words.
DNF
— Dec 19, 2021 04:27PM
Furthermore...
120 pages is all I'm giving this one.
-repetitive sentences
-attempt at world building left me confused and frustrated at the lack of explanation.
-dynamic between characters feels underdeveloped so I didn't feel.
-I wouldn't say this author has a way with words.
DNF
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absolutely _ grim
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Feeling confused and indifferent so far
— Dec 19, 2021 03:40PM

