Puna’s Reviews > Blind Date With A Bear > Status Update
Puna
is 35% done
"A bear could smell a mate or a cub almost twenty miles away." Um, then why did he not smell her the entire month that she lived in town? Heck, he didn't even smell her until he was inside the same restaurant.
— May 07, 2014 11:27PM
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Puna
is 76% done
"When I got close enough, your scent engulfed my senses, awaking my bear as never before.” Which is WAY close then the 20 miles mentioned earlier. I know, I can beat beat something to death. But that's what happens when story line errors annoy me. :-/
— May 08, 2014 05:41AM
