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Jan 05, 2022 09:17AM
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Jan 05, 2022 11:50PM
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Deborah
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So far I like this story but I don't love it. I like the characters, particularly Dani. But I sometimes found the dialogue between Emma and Tamern to be confusing and not sure which one is talking or what they are trying to communicate. I don't know how much this author has written. Is this her first or second published work? The author is not a terrible writer but she could use more experience and polish.
Jan 05, 2022 11:49PM
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Jan 04, 2022 02:03PM
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