Amanda’s Reviews > We Were Once > Status Update

For fuck's sake, Chloe is insufferable

Well, that was unbelievable.

Gathering our clothes, I slip on my jeans before picking up everything else and loading it into the back of the truck.

a couple paragraphs later:

I return to the front of the truck and grab the rest of our clothes. Putting on my jeans, I ask him,

Yeah... so maybe another round of proofreading?

“You feel too good,” he whispers against the shell of my ear before kissing my shoulder. “I don’t know if you’re an angel sent to save me or a reckoning for my sins. I only know that it doesn’t matter. You do. This between us does.”

Yes, this is what people want to hear during sex. And it surely is something people actually say during sex.

It’s the fire she lit in the belly of my soul.

Just when I thought this couldn't get sappier.