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Litolchicken
is 20% done
So far, its not bad. But i just can't get past the fact that im supposedly listening to the inner monologue of a six year old. Like what six year old says stuff like
"He was the epitome of a nonchalant bad boy from tip to toe."
Idk why she had to be written as a six year old if it doesn't go with how she's made to act. I guess if only to push for the age gap troupe? But idk we'll see. So far not dropping yet
— Jan 07, 2022 11:32AM
"He was the epitome of a nonchalant bad boy from tip to toe."
Idk why she had to be written as a six year old if it doesn't go with how she's made to act. I guess if only to push for the age gap troupe? But idk we'll see. So far not dropping yet
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Litolchicken
is 20% done
So far it's nice and all but I can get passed the fact that the dialogue im reading is supposed to be from the mind of a 6 year old. Its just ridiculous to me. I really dont see the point of why the author had to make her this young if her actions dont add up. I guess to push the age gap troupe? Seems unnecessary and unrealistic
— Jan 07, 2022 11:23AM
