LD Durham’s Reviews > The Nothingness of Ben > Status Update

I'm seriously unimpressed. First there is way too much telling going on in the mundane department. Instead of saying a character is cooking, the author gives every detail like turning on the flame, walking to the fridge, walking back, etc. Was the word count short or something? And the protagonist is self-centered and cold. He's not worth following through a novel. Things better turn around quick...