uncharted waters’s Reviews > I'm with You > Status Update
uncharted waters
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Oh, jeez. They just meet and she's asking him if he is a stalker, then the next page she is asking for him to do her. In the most horrid grammar imaginable. The dialogue, what little there is thus far, is choppy and feels as if an eight year old wrote it.
— May 21, 2014 08:20AM
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uncharted waters
is on page 46 of 206
Not sure how this is considered "best-selling." As of my current position I've notice a slew of grammatical errors & horrid grammar. For bow I shall motor on.
— May 21, 2014 08:09AM
