Mari’s Reviews > Wed to the Wild God > Status Update

I normally don’t point these things out but it’s really starting to bother me. This author has probably never been with an intact/uncut man.
The foreskin shouldn’t be described as a separate piece of a man. It’s not separate. When he is aroused it pulls back to the shaft. Basically becoming part of the shaft. The way this scene is written, makes me think of an alien D with extra fleshy bits. 😖