Shalisha’s Reviews > The Alpha's Property > Status Update
Shalisha
is 82% done
So much wrong - Too many POVs & MCs. Could have easily been several books - that way, you could take the time and write a good story. Whew- a mess. T Amber & Preston - the former behaves as if she is going through puberty. Eva & Aiden...yean, I am going to hold there. The whole "mafia" thing? Yeah right - its seriously lacking...Queen of the South, Narco - anything to get an idea.
— Jan 21, 2022 02:16PM
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