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"Are you coming over?" he asked again.
"What? No...No I'm not coming over. Because you know why?" I smiled and laughed when I hit my head against the metal bin.
"Why?" Danny took a shuddering breath.
"Because I'm not gay. And I don't know how to talk to you anymore."
Urgh!!
— Jun 10, 2014 04:11AM
"What? No...No I'm not coming over. Because you know why?" I smiled and laughed when I hit my head against the metal bin.
"Why?" Danny took a shuddering breath.
"Because I'm not gay. And I don't know how to talk to you anymore."
Urgh!!
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Faggot queer, flamer, homo. Fucking no!!!! This is not the way to write and this is not the way to make a point.
— Jun 10, 2014 08:12AM
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I don't know. I find the characters particularly awful and the dialogue jarring.
"Ah, shit," Paul grumbled when he turned the corner and saw the big window. "The queer's working tonight."
"Oh..." I glanced into the clear glass pane. They'd hired this guy a couple of years ago who was so painfully gay that he hurt my eyes.
Hmm...
— Jun 10, 2014 03:13AM
"Ah, shit," Paul grumbled when he turned the corner and saw the big window. "The queer's working tonight."
"Oh..." I glanced into the clear glass pane. They'd hired this guy a couple of years ago who was so painfully gay that he hurt my eyes.
Hmm...
