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Why is every character that is named Elena super annoying?
Writing is pretty bad, you know what is going to happen in the whole story from around the 3rd chapter. alot of info dumping convos.
Good story, just wish it was written by someone who had faith in peoples ability to figure out stuff on their own.
audiobook narrator is pretty bad, could have done without the racist depiction of asian characters.
— Jan 29, 2022 09:45PM
Writing is pretty bad, you know what is going to happen in the whole story from around the 3rd chapter. alot of info dumping convos.
Good story, just wish it was written by someone who had faith in peoples ability to figure out stuff on their own.
audiobook narrator is pretty bad, could have done without the racist depiction of asian characters.
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