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The plot is engaging and I'm really enjoying it, but I struggle with the character choices. Corbette is still cold, while poor Lucia, who has every right to be skittish after her rape, is the one who is courageous and compassionate. It's becoming hard to root for a romance when he seems so undeserving of her.
— Jun 17, 2014 10:17AM
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It's odd that Lucia and Corbette's emotional and physical relationship seems rushed. The author through Lucia's perspective will state how much he's changed, but it isn't really shown through his actions. And weirder still is Kai who keeps having scenes illustrating his genuine affection for Zetian and his self sacrifice for his people. Corbette is honestly turning out to be the week link in this story.
— Jun 17, 2014 01:09PM