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Ali
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It's the character's voices - Donna is just a bit too much. She's all snark and no substance so far. Jefferson is just a bit too stoic, but also realistically unsure of himself. Hmmm . . .
— Jun 17, 2014 04:28PM
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Ali
is 40% done
I put this book aside for over a week because I just wasn't getting lost in the story, and I wasn't interested in the characters, but something happened. This book has picked up steam. The storytelling has grown sharper and the action is exciting and well written. The distinction between the two voices has grown clearer. I'm into this book now. I care about these characters now and that is always a great sign.
— Jun 30, 2014 07:31PM
Ali
is 16% done
My last update should have been 16% not page 16. Why no edit feature?
— Jun 17, 2014 04:29PM
Ali
is 7% done
Chapter 1 read a bit choppy - the writing style - but it certainly isn't short on action. I think I'm acclimating myself to the writer's style.
— Jun 17, 2014 02:15PM
