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Jess✧✵
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The pacing is definitely getting better now. The story is taking a different direction than I anticipated and there's not as much Dante on-page as I thought there would be. I'm still curious to see if certain things brought up in the first hundred pages will be addressed later in the book.
— Feb 09, 2022 03:26PM
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Jess✧✵
is on page 102 of 516
Buddy reading this with Em was such a good move because we literally have all the same issues with the way the story is being set up so far. I was expecting this to be a slower build like the first book was, but we're thrust into the story right where book one left off and the pacing to me along with the depth and scope of the conversations being presented in the first hundred pages feels off. More thoughts to come.
— Feb 07, 2022 06:23PM
