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Margaret
Margaret is 25% done
There is a redundancy in the writing. How many times must Hedi remind herself about “the high stakes?” The reader hasn’t forgotten, why the repeated reminders? wedding hasn’t yet happened and the groom has become demanding and disrespectful and the bride feels like a bought woman. Blech.
Feb 11, 2022 08:48PM
The Only Woman in the Room

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