Diamond Drake’s Reviews > The Value of Vulnerability > Status Update

I'm starting to hate this lopsided relationship. Erin has to report her every move but Ford doesn't divulge s***! She better nip that in the bud!

So now we're using GERMAN words? Verboten? Seriously? Is it THAT hard to just say forbidden? I had to waste time on the internet finding the word because it's not in the dictionary. I thought this was supposed to be a romance, not a college term paper! I'm so frustrated and I'm gonna read something else for a while.

Another romantic moment ruined by unnecessary words that seem plucked from a thesaurus! Who says sacrosanct when she's about to get it popping on the dining room table?! Give me a BREAK!

Re-jigging?

I wish these acronyms were explained. I don't work in the business, IT world so I'm not familiar with the terminology.

Despite my griping, I do like the story. Erin and Ford are interesting to me and I'm interested to see how things will turn out between them.

. . . in black kid? What does that mean in relation to gloves? I don't get it.

What in the world is verklempt?! See, this is what I'm talking about!

I really do like the story. I just wish there wasn't such unnecessary and over usage of words. That really is killing a perfectly good story.