Manjari’s Reviews > A Case for Christmas > Status Update
Manjari
is 2% done
Good grief, there is a staggering amount of expository excess in the first few pages of this story. This does not bode well for the remainder, but I hope to be proven wrong.
— Feb 23, 2022 05:52AM
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Manjari
is 23% done
Okay, so yeah, I got past the lacklustre opening, and the rest has been great, so far. I’m still not a huge fan of multiple POVs, but it’s lots of fun regardless
— Feb 26, 2022 09:12PM
