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Peggy
is 47% done
The writing is still not really doing it for me, too descriptive of what happened instead of showing what is actually happening. I like that the story is told from two perspectives and that it covers many years, but it annoys me terribly when authors can't keep their own story straight. A girl who is 17 in 1937 can never be celebrating her 23rd birthday in 1946!
— Jul 04, 2014 08:38AM
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Peggy
is 22% done
I really like the descriptions of Jamaica, what the country looks like, what the people are like, how they celebrate special events etc. The story and the writing itself are okay.
— Jul 03, 2014 12:44AM
