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Kyra
is 47% done
Ok I can deal with the typos, I can even deal with the "I have a disabled daughter so I'm gonna say 'crippled' 50 times to make the audience feel bad for me" villain. But the MC pushing a naked man at a group of girls so he can chase them and at minimum group them? Ugh.
— Jul 08, 2014 09:42PM
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Kyra
is 50% done
I'm going to keep reading, I really am but man it's hard when she's using masculine pronouns for a bearded woman.
— Jul 08, 2014 10:02PM
Kyra
is 39% done
Wait, she had never seen Dark Ryder before because she was new to the city, right? She wanted to get away from her dad...but the company headquarters is in New York? And so is Jenny?
— Jul 08, 2014 08:58PM
Kyra
is 27% done
I really like how relatable this is so far, how real the MC is. The author's not trying to make it anything than what it is.
— Jul 07, 2014 11:05PM
Kyra
is 8% done
I like the concept of this so far and the writing is decent. But of course she makes a big deal assuming the hot guy in glasses is gay because he told her she couldn't run in high heels. "Don't look at me that way I'm not gay I just notice woman's shoes" ugh so dumb
— Jul 07, 2014 03:45PM
