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Daniel Kloke
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Needs an editor. Author told a story about how a Target salesperson could not understand that the author wanted a cell phone without Internet (this was evidence of how our culture has become Internet-centric). My first thought is maybe Target (the store) did not have what you want at all, but the salesperson is trying to find something close. Author later admits he found the only suitable phone elsewhere.
— Mar 03, 2022 08:53AM
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Daniel Kloke
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"Commercial street runs through the middle of Provincetown and I walked past the neat New England stores selling lobsters and sex toys." Author needs an editor. Or maybe the author is casually letting us know of his side hustle.
I had to relisten (audio book) to this sentence a couple of times.
— Mar 03, 2022 09:01AM
I had to relisten (audio book) to this sentence a couple of times.
Daniel Kloke
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When a journalist decides to write a book like a newspaper article or blog rather than as an author.
— Mar 03, 2022 08:48AM

