TinaNoir’s Reviews > Taste of Lacey > Status Update
TinaNoir
is 9% done
Ok so between this:
"His paler skin against her brown softness fucked with his head so badly he had to stop and savor the contrast of their complexions"
and this:
"His cockhead managed to delve into her glory"
and this:
"He groaned in an unrecognizable voice as cum shot from him at high speed"
I just can't with this awful love scene. The story is good. Love scene needs a scene doctor, stat!
— Jul 14, 2014 05:24AM
"His paler skin against her brown softness fucked with his head so badly he had to stop and savor the contrast of their complexions"
and this:
"His cockhead managed to delve into her glory"
and this:
"He groaned in an unrecognizable voice as cum shot from him at high speed"
I just can't with this awful love scene. The story is good. Love scene needs a scene doctor, stat!
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TinaNoir
is 40% done
Welp, at this point I am skimming. Her pussy is legit a supporting character in this book. It does so much. It gets hot, it clenches, it gets happy, it is a drug, it has power, it "transformed into a pleasure station"
— Jul 14, 2014 03:41PM
