David Torres’s Reviews > Rising > Status Update

Omg. Why us it now that this book got so goid??

Now things are interesting, :)

Where did xanthus get all this money to buy an apartment building??? Triton?

Ok so im wondering. What does Sara wear underwater? Does she wear a bikini top or is she just completely naked like xanthus? And if she is naked, why would she care if xanthus sees her naked out of water like. Why bother saying "im decent. Come in?"

Yes! There we go! Xanthus is now feeling more realistic. He's questioning if he didnt kill sara at first necause she is. Esutiful. And the comes to the conclusion that he would have killed if she was a half human man. So xanthus isnt perfect. I like that. He seems for real to me now.

Wait wait... Xanthus is the one having an identity crisis? WHAT?!

So sara still doesnt know Xanthus at a personal level. Or at all, really. She had shocking news broken to her. I mean shes half dsgonian. Sure she isnt a cripple and thats good, but shes not human! Anyone would be freaked. And what does sara do? She gets tired and cuddles with Xanthus... Yeah her character isnt believable. I like Xanthus way better.

Dagonians as a rule stay far away from humans. This sounds fishy.... Pun intended. It felt like i stubbed my toe reading through this, i had to read it a few times to understand it. And it is correct..... Just ass the commas where they are supposed to be. Please. "Dagonians, as a rule, stay far away from humans. "

"Oh no, you did not just laugh me." Laugh at me... Really???? Uugh.... This book has promise.... But its dying on me.

Sara is scared shitless. She believes xanthus is drowning her and shes fighting like crazy to get free. And shes been underwater for a ling time and she hasn't suffocated. How can she not realize that?! Honestly i like xanthus's character better. He is more believable and realistic.