Aleixie’s Reviews > Forsaken Fae: Book One > Status Update

this is getting annoying to read. dude talks shit like he has a backbone, and all of these characters seem like carbon copies of each other in terms of attitude

Like, that's what I mean! First it's vampire lore, then a paragraph about the beat up couch, then a chunk of text on a character's kinky sex life. And we still don't know anything relevant to the actual scene.

So far, the prose has been all over the place. Everyone is making faces at each other, I don't know who is speaking what lines, the characters are switching topics worse that a group of seven year olds . . .