Aleixie’s Reviews > Forsaken Fae: Book One > Status Update
Aleixie
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So far, the prose has been all over the place. Everyone is making faces at each other, I don't know who is speaking what lines, the characters are switching topics worse that a group of seven year olds . . .
— Mar 17, 2022 08:13PM
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Aleixie
is on page 21 of 249
this is getting annoying to read. dude talks shit like he has a backbone, and all of these characters seem like carbon copies of each other in terms of attitude
— Mar 19, 2022 08:05AM
Aleixie
is on page 11 of 249
Like, that's what I mean! First it's vampire lore, then a paragraph about the beat up couch, then a chunk of text on a character's kinky sex life. And we still don't know anything relevant to the actual scene.
— Mar 17, 2022 08:23PM
Aleixie
is starting
can we all agree that the guy on the cover looks like Witcher Geralt of Rivia? but like the slimy sleezy version that wouldn't go "hmm"
— Mar 17, 2022 04:42PM