Donna’s Reviews > No Turning Back > Status Update

Meh. I like Cash, and Joe is alright, this is just way too long. There's a lot on general college life and way too many minor characters. This entire thing needs more things happening, or it needs to be compacted down.

Oh my God, please stop with all the hot guys and the use of "ohmygawh". Gawh. Haha, what a funny word.

Ok, I understand the effects that rape can have on people, but this is just so poorly incorporated into the story. The girl is all fine and happy and then she just brings it up really randomly. She mentions it as a reason that she can't swim, but I really don't see how the two are related.

Ok, the MC just said that she's not a big drinker around ten times. Geez, I get it. It's not even a big deal. I'm so glad that I didn't spend money on this.