Brooke’s Reviews > Hollywood Dreams > Status Update
Brooke
is 32% done
Okay, so I'm intrigued and I wanna know what happens with them. The story is an interesting concept. But the writing is kinda driving me batshit... Too much TELLING going on.
— Jul 27, 2014 12:22PM
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Brooke
is 40% done
I feel like this is a British or Australian author writing about Americans. Several words and phrases are more British English than American English. Mum instead of mom, a trolley instead of a cart at the grocery store, a note instead of a dollar, etc. And just the general sentence structure...
— Jul 27, 2014 12:42PM
