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freyrik has weirdly overactive caretaking instincts. seems very out of character for a prince. someone raised as royalty from birth wouldn’t be so worried about tending the wounds of an enemy themselves when there’s a house full of servants to do it.
— Mar 28, 2022 12:46AM
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so much of this is nonsensical and unrealistic. in what world would an army commander (the prince) just instantly lust over an enemy captive who took out several of his men? surely he’d have bigger concerns at first??? feels very insta-love to me :/
the “interrogation” was probably the worst way to tell the readers the backstory. it felt out of place and unnatural. that’s not how interrogations work lmao.
— Mar 28, 2022 12:33AM
the “interrogation” was probably the worst way to tell the readers the backstory. it felt out of place and unnatural. that’s not how interrogations work lmao.
