Si Clarke’s Reviews > Black Swan Planet > Status Update

The writing is good. The story is interesting. The editing leaves something to be desired. But now we can add transphobia and homophobia to the racism, misogyny, and ableism.

This really needed a sensitivity reader (or probably several). So far we’ve got a slang-talking, ganja-smoking Rastafarian, the R-word, and stinky curry jokes.

Interesting story. Decent writing. Problematic.